Joint Poetic Qualitative Analysis: “Being The Wind!”
Dr. Amb. Prof. Joseph Spence Sr
USA
From: The Desk of His Excellency, Dr. Amb. Prof. Joseph S. Spence, Sr. (Epulaeryu Master), USA., Senior Advisor to Motivational Strips Poetry Platform Founder, Honorable Shiju H. Pallithazheth, Oman. The most active poetry platform in the world with over 4.5 million hits each month, and active worldwide representatives in 106 countries.
Joint Poetic Qualitative Analysis: “Being The Wind!”
Greetings my dear brothers and sisters. These two poems by Aditi Raj Jamal, India, and His Excellency, Dr. Joseph S. Spence, Sr. USA, are just awesome and incredibly touching. First and foremost, they are very inspiring regarding what they will accomplish being the wind. They uplift the souls of humanity with much grace to see a sparkling side of life. Being the wind is beyond one's imagination. Total freedom of such is proliferated in both ingenious and imaginative poems.
The poems extend nothing but blessings to the world as they blow for humanity’s grace and upliftment. These two poems do not like the thoughts discrimination and are ready to do what is necessary to flush out discrimination and replace it with love and inspiration for all people.
These two poems want so see everyone dancing in glee as they swish by in harmony, and caressing cheeks during their travels. The thought of people shaking their shoulders and rocking their body-lines like waves in the ocean is just incredible for all to behold.
These two poems embrace nature and blow in any direction, which is like spirituality manifesting itself in a greater order for humanity. They cause people to express life’s pleasure, with a sweet hush, wiping away fuss, no cuss, with all things wonderful and just.
Being lost in the wind from these two poems, is like dancing on hill tops, singing in the rain, eating sweet mangoes, flipping, humming, kissing and caressing in the wind. These two poems are so nice, they reflect sweet sugar and spice. Bringing nice fragrance to a stagnant pond, everyone would want to skip, spin, dip and sing, knowing that stinking smell is gone, and sweetness prevails.
The qualitative essence of these two poems, with a nice song in the wind is like, lovers strolling out arm in arm, softly touching, holding, with the melody and harmony of the song. Such an ingenious stitch of lover’s bliss. The expression and notion of feeling like butterflies floating around, is like reviving life’s pleasures beyond measures, with red lips humming and warming much with a sweet touch.
The awesome essence of these two poems being the wind, elevates the soul of any and everyone in their loving patch of contact; thus, making them feel brand new, eliminating heart’s painful nagging blues. Just imagine such a refreshing state of tranquility to the mind, body, and soul these two poems bring.
The inductive and deductive reasoning and logic used in both poems are consistent with each other. They summarized the actions expected from the beginning to the ending of each. My sister Aditi’s poem is still my most favorite in "Sipay International Literary Journal."
This is just a short and joint summation of both poems, which focused on the essence of the theme regarding the wind. They reflect peace, love, and harmony with an essence of endearment!
Everyone should get involve in an action such as this one. It’s refreshing, brings people closer together, generates inspiration, coordination and collaboration of effort for future growth of Motivation Strips Poetry Forum with unity. Have an awesome Valentine’s Day weekend, don’t forget to pray, stay encouraged, inspired, ingenious, resilient, and blessed always!
His Excellency, Dr. Amb. Prof. Joseph S. Spence Sr. Senior Advisor to Founder of Motivational Strips Poetry Platform. Honorable Shiju H. Pallithazheth, Muscat, Oman.
